Can I get feedback on this Fallout Equestria fanfic?https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13107414/1/Fallout-Equestria-Sunrise-Stardust-and-The-Burned-World

Name78050
Email
Subject	NSFW Image
Comment
File
Embed
Password	(For file deletion.)

File: 1552410553296.jpg (114.94 KB, 900x1148, sunrise_stardust_and_the_b….jpg)

Sunrise Stardust and the Burned World Anonymous 03/12/19 (Tue) 17:09:13 No.1248

Can I get feedback on this Fallout Equestria fanfic?
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13107414/1/Fallout-Equestria-Sunrise-Stardust-and-The-Burned-World

Anonymous 03/13/19 (Wed) 14:56:11 No.1252

First chapter is too long

Anonymous 03/14/19 (Thu) 16:34:51 No.1257

I read up to chapter 5, it's good so far.
Why is Sunrise Stardust so different from Littlepip?

Anonymous 03/15/19 (Fri) 21:25:28 No.1277

>>1257
Because he isn't Littlepip, he's a gangster.

Anonymous 03/16/19 (Sat) 17:25:08 No.1283

Why is this site so inactive?

Anonymous 03/16/19 (Sat) 20:25:29 No.1284

>>1248
>fanfiction.net
>not fimfiction

Anonymous 03/17/19 (Sun) 02:14:00 No.1285

File: 1552788840853.jpeg (239.23 KB, 1920x1080, 1889199.jpeg)

>>1283
It's hard to get the word out to 4chan about this, especially to a lot of people at the same time. When one or two people come in at once there's no constant activity to feed the activity, so hopefully setting a date for a Grand Opening would coordinate a lot of people to come in at once. This site needs a sudden burst of new people to become active, not a slow trickle.

Anonymous 03/17/19 (Sun) 12:03:43 No.1286

>>1284
I don't like fimfiction. Its admins are corrupt, and the site's highschool as fuck. My fic's on Ao3, if you'd prefer: https://archiveofourown.org/works/16914561/chapters/39739335
>>1285
Good call! Something like the grand reveal of a weekly Site Blog that advertises pony content like a non-biased non-corrupt Equestria Daily would be great, too.
>fag: but writing a site blog is hard!
You're writing 1k words a week tops while advertising content others made with small paragraphs followed by links, this job couldn't be easier. But if it really seems that hard, I volunteer to be the writer for that blog.

Anonymous 03/17/19 (Sun) 21:59:30 No.1289

>>1286
If you could write for Poni that would be great! I have way too many irons in the fire to take any more responsibilities myself, but my tech friend is looking into making a blog board here where registered "reporters" could make threads about things for users to discuss about.

Anonymous 03/18/19 (Mon) 15:06:30 No.1293

>>1289
Thanks! That'd be good.

Anonymous 03/18/19 (Mon) 21:54:58 No.1297

My next chapter will contain an in-depth explanation of Equestria's magic system.

Anonymous 03/19/19 (Tue) 02:48:38 No.1304

File: 1552963718061.png (759.4 KB, 4000x4907, 255683.png)

>>1293
The /news/ board is about ready to open, and the reporter log-in has now been implemented. How do I contact you to share the password for posting there?

Anonymous 03/21/19 (Thu) 00:09:09 No.1345

>>1304
Send me a note with it here: https://www.deviantart.com/silverstarapple

Anonymous 03/23/19 (Sat) 14:01:50 No.1371

So, how bout that fic, eh?

Anonymous 03/25/19 (Mon) 06:00:23 No.1400

>>1304
>wanting nigel to write anything
my newfag detector is off the charts

Anonymous 03/26/19 (Tue) 19:43:02 No.1414

>>1400
That's not my name, don't bring that meme here. Nigel's the fag on 4chan's /v/ who yells "kill yourself ponyfag! this is your mindset!" whenever someone posts a pic on /v/ that's also on derpibooru.
He hates MLP because he's still stuck in the "I'm a cool dude who hates Barney the Dinosaur" phase, I just don't like your waifu, waifufag.

Anonymous 03/27/19 (Wed) 07:14:38 No.1418

>>1414
>still thinking that Nigel isn't just a colloquial way of calling a Brit a Brit
>still repeating the "this is your mindset" guy as if people didn't straight up tell you that that wasn't what they were calling you Nigel for
Just because this isn't best board doesn't mean you can bullshit us.

Would you rather we call you Jason? Or Silver "I am composed of 98% seed, and none of it is mine" Star? ^:)

Anonymous 03/28/19 (Thu) 00:09:05 No.1422

>>1248
>opening copied from the show
>cringy references in 5th line
stopped reading right there

>>1414
My God, can you get even more new

>>1286
>corrupt
>non-biased non-corrupt
lemme guess, your pathetic submission didn't get accepted and didn't get the praise it of course rightfully deserves?

>>1304
This site is a one big mistake, but I think letting this guy anywhere close to any position is the biggest mistake yet

Anonymous 03/28/19 (Thu) 02:26:24 No.1423

>>1422
>lemme guess, your pathetic submission didn't get accepted and didn't get the praise it of course rightfully deserves?
This. Jason's a massive faggot who spends all his time shilling bad fanfics and incomplete hand-drawn Pokemon mods, and whenever people tell him to take five seconds to edit his work he shuns them as corrupt and declares them a glimmernigger. But o noes, I don't have a hateboner for the glimglam, don't be ridiculous.

Anonymous 03/31/19 (Sun) 12:41:27 No.1446

>>1422
>lemme guess, your pathetic submission didn't get accepted and didn't get the praise it of course rightfully deserves?
Actually, my submissions were accepted. The shit I didn't like happened to friends I like.
>>1423
Honestly, my life would be more entertaining if I was the villain you think I am. Because then I'd get into all kinds of hilariously wacky shenanigans. But that'd get boring after a while, so I'm glad I'm not like that.
Anyway, there's a thread on the other site where I'm listening to the feedback given on my work, and learning from it.
You're just pretending I think all critics are fags because you don't like that I called you a fag.

Anonymous 03/31/19 (Sun) 16:13:47 No.1447

>>1446
I can't recall a single time you didn't call critics fags.

Anonymous 04/01/19 (Mon) 19:59:25 No.1449

>>1447
For real? I'm sorry. I won't mock you for that, it wouldn't be right.
By the way, what did you think of my chapter 3?

Anonymous 04/30/19 (Tue) 18:31:00 No.1556

NEW CHAPTER COMING SOON

Anonymous 06/27/19 (Thu) 20:39:46 No.2007

New Chapters are out! The story's 145,000 words long now.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13107414/9/Fallout-Equestria-Sunrise-Stardust-and-The-Burned-World
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13107414/10/Fallout-Equestria-Sunrise-Stardust-and-The-Burned-World

Anonymous 06/28/19 (Fri) 12:27:14 No.2012

>>2007
>penis demons
the fuck?

Anonymous 07/02/19 (Tue) 18:36:53 No.2029

>>2012
What can I say? The character has penises on the brain.

Anonymous 07/04/19 (Thu) 07:57:24 No.2044

>>2029
Does it describe what penis demons are like or do i have to use my imagination?

Anonymous 07/06/19 (Sat) 23:51:02 No.2049

>>2044
Flare Blitzen is fighting the Penis Legion and a literal cock and ball torture demon as a metaphor for how he struggles with gay thoughts.

Anonymous 07/10/19 (Wed) 19:35:45 No.2060

>>2049
But why